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Franklin Oliver's avatar

My poetic response to Trayvon's murder.

Neighborhood Watch

It was raining like hell

When they cuffed me

I told the cops

It was simple

An eye for an eye

Leaves the whole world blind

Just like Lady Justice

Except that I have a smile

Not a smirk

On my face

See, Trayvon carried skittles

But I packed heat

When I followed George

From his house

Until he idled

At the drive through

It’s hard to leave a Krispy Kreme

Once you’ve seen the Hot light

And it’s even harder

After I’ve dropped my whole clip

Into your chest

I told the cops

It was simple

Lady Justice is blind

But I can see clearly

The rain is gone

© Gayle Force Press 2017

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John S's avatar

The South won. Reconstruction was terminated early (which wouldn't have happened had Garfield not been assassinated).

Franklin Oliver's avatar

You're right in the big picture but not the timeline. Garfield is killed in 1881 while Reconstruction ended in 1877. That early death was the result of white supremacist violence in the South (and malaise in the North) that led to the contested election of 1876.

Cryn Johannsen's avatar

this post has gotten little traction, which disgusts me

Me's avatar

These are all heartbreaking stories. Michael Brown's case is especially close to my heart as it occurred just a few miles from where I live in St. Louis. We do need to be reminded now and then about those who have been injured and killed, then left behind in the annals of time. You are right. We have always been this way.

C. Jacobs's avatar

Amen. Every word of this.

Godfrey Moase's avatar

I can’t help but feel the extra-judicial execution immediately after the general strike was a response from a bunch of cowards — do not resist.

julie elder's avatar

This is what I’ve been trying to get across to these “Christian” conservatives I know—it started out with people of color, but beware, it won’t end there.

All these tactics will come for you and yours too.

Susan Niemann's avatar

I never wanted to acknowledge this but I finally realize it’s the truth. We’ve always been this way. We are violent and primitive.

Michael X's avatar

🙌❤️🔥

David Black's avatar

Yes, we have NEVER BEN any better